This is a story written in response
to a photograph of two children skipping rocks by a lake. It had a caption that
is reused in my first line which I expanded on in order to complete an
assignment that required me to write a "creepy" story. I feel like I
have successfully done this and hope I won't give you nightmares.
He threw with all
his might but the third stone came skipping back. He stood there, staring at
the rock that just landed between his feet. Dumfounded was the only word that
could have described him at that moment. Raising his head, he locked eyes with
his sister and was met with a mirrored look of confusion and fright. Like the
curious cat, he picked up another rock and skipped it across the foggy water
and into the darkening depths only to have it sent back to him. His sister,
eagerly wanted to leave, tugging at his arm, “I’m scared Jonathan.”
“It will be fine
Juliette,” he comforted her, “Watch.” And he reached for a rather robust rock
that lay in the sand not 20 feet away.
“Don’t!” exclaimed
Juliette.
“Trust me. There’s
no way this one’s coming back.” And he hurled it into the water. “See, nothing!”
A pale light began
to illuminate the water near where the rock had submerged. “I told you!” Juliette
screamed as she began to run up the sand bank away from the water, leaving
Jonathan standing there like a deer in the headlights. She looked back in time
to see what seemed like a mountain shooting out of the water. The night went
pitch black as the boulder shrouded the moon. In the darkness she stumbled and
fell. When she picked herself up she gazed hopelessly at what must have been a
two ton rock resting on the bank where she thought her brother had stood, and
where she now knew he laid.
Whoa that was chilling! Great description!
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